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I really like how this sketch is going, I must've redrawn that right arm so many times but it's finally looking ok to me. Let me know if anything looks off, nows the time before it gets inked! I'm hoping that if I post the wip it I'll actually get the motivation to finish ^_^
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I'd love to see this one finished. I personally can't see anything that looks wron, but then again, anatomy and I aren't that close friends. 
The mane looks very fluffy, but still like it belongs in your semi-pointy style (not the most elegant way to describe it I guess, but it was all I could come up with right now).
Somehow my head added a Pride to the title, so it was Wounded Pride, instead of just Wounded. Then I imagine that he wasn't as much crying out because it hurt (and I'm sure it does!) but more because the one who shot him perhaps was somebody he'd been to proud to see as a real threat. Maybe he never imagined somebody would dare to attack him prom a distance. I could imagine somebody like him would see that as a cowardly way to fight, not with claws and jaws, but with weapons.
It's all silly speculation due to a misreading, but I thought you maybe would like to hear it anyway, I still think it kinda fits...
The mane looks very fluffy, but still like it belongs in your semi-pointy style (not the most elegant way to describe it I guess, but it was all I could come up with right now).
Somehow my head added a Pride to the title, so it was Wounded Pride, instead of just Wounded. Then I imagine that he wasn't as much crying out because it hurt (and I'm sure it does!) but more because the one who shot him perhaps was somebody he'd been to proud to see as a real threat. Maybe he never imagined somebody would dare to attack him prom a distance. I could imagine somebody like him would see that as a cowardly way to fight, not with claws and jaws, but with weapons.
It's all silly speculation due to a misreading, but I thought you maybe would like to hear it anyway, I still think it kinda fits...